ТЕМА: Эссе. Тренируемся в написании вместе

Воображение надо развивать еще с детства. Вторая причина-читают дети мало, самообразованием почти не занимаются. Слова плохо учат и т.д.

Балабанова Ольга Юрьевна пишет: Ольга Юрьевна, как я Вас понимаю. Сталкивалась с этой проблемой: не могут придумать аргументы даже на русском - 1 говорят аргумент, а второй - с первым сочетается ("масло масляное"). прошу тогда учеников посмотреть на проблему шире - с разных точек зрения: психологической, образовательной и т.д. (расширяю кругозор) Тогда лёд трогается. А аргументов - 2-3 найти надо, задача решаемая. Нужно учить ребят видеть и плюсы и минусы в любом вопросе, а еще сложнее в четвертом абзаце записать грамотно контраргумент, "побить оппонентов", как понимаете. Вывод хороший оформить - тоже учить приходится, чтобы не было повторов в сочинении. Как говорится, PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT!

Проверьте сочинение, пожалуйста, скажите, где неправильно.
Тема: A person who is fluent in a foreign language can easily teach it.
Сочинение:While many people believe that that knowledge of a foreign language is sufficient for teaching it, others think that there must be other skills as well. I personally believe that fluently speaking is not enough for teaching people.
Firstly, a person who is fluent in a foreign language is not always able to explain some rules as he understands it. Sometimes it is even better to read a good textbook and to try to understand it yourself than to listen to a person who cannot explain it properly. Secondly, I strongly believe that a person who wants to teach people foreign language should possess some important qualities for it such as literacy, erudition and courtesy. To acquire these qualities it is not enough to know the language well. One should work over himself and read a lot of books. Moreover, a person needs to be very patient to explain something that someone may not understand at once.
On the contrary, you can learn a correct pronunciation of words, communicating with people who speak a foreign language fluently. Moreover, this kind of person can serve as a good example for learning a language.
I can hardly agree with it. I strongly believe that if you ardently, truly want to learn a foreign language you can do it yourself.
To sum up, I think that it is good to communicate with people who speak fluently a foreign language, but only professionals must teach it.

Тема: A person who is fluent in a foreign language can easily teach it.
Сочинение:While many people believe that knowledge of a foreign language is sufficient for teaching it, others think that there must be other skills as well. I personally believe that fluent speaking is not enough for teaching people.
Firstly, a person who is fluent in a foreign language is not always able to explain some rules as he understands it. Sometimes it is even better to read a good textbook and to try to understand it by yourself than to listen to a person who cannot explain it properly. Secondly, I strongly believe that a person who wants to teach people a foreign language should possess some important qualities for it such as literacy, erudition and courtesy. To acquire these qualities it is not enough to know the language well. One should work over himself and read a lot of books. Moreover, a person needs to be very patient to explain something that someone may not understand at once.
On the contrary, you can learn a correct pronunciation of words, communicating with people who speak a foreign language fluently. Moreover, this kind of person can serve as a good example for learning a language.
I can hardly agree with it. I strongly believe that if you want to learn a foreign language you can do it on your own.
To sum up, I think that it is good to communicate with people who speak a foreign language fluently, but only professionals must teach it.

Из вступления я бы убрала третье предложение. Так как здесь мы должны установить проблему, а не высказывать собственное мнение.

Начала бы второй абзац так - As for me + свое мнение. Затем уже аргументы.

И третий абзац бы переделала. Other people believe + 2 их аргумента. И, наконец, свой, последний аргумент.

Заключение нормально.